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Panel Line art FTW!!

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Yes! finally,I linearted it. That is harder than it looks,believe me -__-"" So,I did this drawing of my poem I had to write for Valentines Day my English teacher gave my class. I thought he was going to ask for us to turn it in when we got back to school the next day,but he never did,so I was like"...all that hard work..for nothing-wahh!" and I scanned and linearted it and changed a couple of things just like I planned. I am NOT letting that awesome piece go to waste. That would be like killing a part of my soul *dramatic sigh*

Sis: So dramatic

Me: Am not

Sis: Are to.

Me: Am not.

Sis: Are to.
*2 hours go by*(serious..We would literally do this if we could..Yes,we are those kinds of sisters-family,it's amazing what they do with each other)

Let me know what you think about this :D What do I need to improve on? Do I need to add anything? etc. Constructive criticism is welcomed XD
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this is really cute. In the top one, though, her body is too small and her arms are too short. but i do like the lining. very clean. in the bottom one, one leg is bigger than the other. the tree looks too simple and you should add more to it. The mouth needs to be a little bit more to the left in the middle one.